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   제 목   10.07 Homework    상 태  
   교정강사   Colleen(C)    등록일   2022-10-11
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  A.) When was the last time you went on a trip? Where did you go? Please elaborate on your answer. 2 weeks ago I went to Hakwon farm in South Korea. There were so many sunflowers in the garden. B.) Make these sentences into English. (10/07/22) 1. 내가 창문을 잠갔는지 가서 확인해 봐 I usually check I closed the windows. 2. 의사들은 흔히 아주 장시간 근무를 한다 The doctors work so many long time. 3. 한 무리의 아이들이 거리에서 공을 가지고 놀고 있었다 A group of children playing the ball on the street.
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A.) When was the last time you went on a trip? Where did you go? Please elaborate on your answer.

2 weeks ago I went to Hakwon farm in South Korea. There were so many sunflowers in the garden.

=>  Two weeks ago, I went to Hakwon farm in South Korea. There were so many sunflowers in the garden.​

 

 

 

B.) Make these sentences into English.

 

(10/07/22)

 

1. 내가 창문을 잠갔는지 가서 확인해 봐

I usually check I closed the windows.

=>   Go and check if I've locked the window.
 

2. 의사들은 흔히 아주 장시간 근무를 한다

The doctors work so many long time.

=>  Doctors often work very long hours.

 

3. 한 무리의 아이들이 거리에서 공을 가지고 놀고 있었다

A group of children playing the ball on the street.

 Your sentence is okay and this is another way of saying it.

​=>  A group of kids were playing with a ball in the street.


• Corrected: The sentences are corrected grammatically.